"John hunches over a typewriter."
INT. Coffee Shop, Midday, Cloudy/Rainy
The coffee shop is delicately decorated, a knick knack here and there, very few windows, and covered with a lush, toe sinking carpet. In a corner, sits a large chair and a young man slouched in it, a small table, and a very large type writer. The young man tired and lonesome eyed. Scruffed face, oily hair, sweat on his forehead, and dark circles under his eyes. Only a few words typed out on the paper.
I love the detail you put into the adaptation. It really paints a picture of the setting and the tone.
ReplyDeleteThats sound really interesting. Are you gone shoot that?
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